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I really enjoyed this. I love the way you used sound, like when it went from a storm to silent I was immersed hahahah. Fun too, and I enjoyed the narrative. 

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very good work
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its decent. i like it but not too much. very good work tho!

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You should never like something too much; that's unhealthy!!

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yea fair point

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I think my favorite part is the clock.  I realize it might technically just be there because of the "ten minutes" theme, but I felt like it brought the atmosphere together--first, because it was a reminder that it's all happening at 2:30am, and second, because it felt like a slow build to something.  ("Now it's 2:34.  Why are we counting the minutes?  Does something happen at 2:36, or 2:37...?")

I mean, obviously, also everything else was good too. :-)  I liked Naomi using that sentence over and over as if it were a mantra; it really got across how wrong she felt.  (You could have even had less "I am not a monster" thoughts, I think--just her saying, over and over, "I am a perfectly normal human" makes it so clear that she knows she's not.)

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A very cool experience, super interested to see Naomi's full story!

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